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Near Death Experience

You and I have always shared a love of thunderstorms

 

but there was one that put all other storms to shame.

 

A group of us were walking back toward campus.

 

We hadn’t even seen the first drops of rain.

 

Then you threw your hands in the air

 

challenged god to strike you down.

 

suddenly thunder boomed

 

and lightening flashed all around.

 

Everyone else was scared

 

but you and I could feel

 

the energy in the air

 

and we knew that it was real.

 

We stood atop that hill

 

as the sky grew dark overhead

 

and watched as a violet bolt

 

ignited flames of red.

 

And that ring of coal black clouds

 

looked like the apocalypse.

 

Our friends all ran off

 

but we just stood transfixed

 

by the blinding contrast of

 

those brilliant flashing lights

 

as they threw waves of gold

 

across that ruthless sky.

 

At last we managed to break the hold

 

that storm had over our minds

 

still as we ran we watched behind us

 

wanting to see all it’s destruction unwind.

 

We joined our friends in what seemed like safety

 

the car we thought would take us home

 

but then it stopped and sat there frozen.

 

We felt exposed and all alone.

 

We waited for what seemed like eternity

 

as the storm raged on outside.

 

When help finally came to get us

 

we all thought they’d saved our lives.

 

It felt like a near death experience.

 

Looking back now I know it was not.

 

Still when I think of that night I remember

 

how excited we were by the thought.

 

We were trapped in a tiny metal car

 

on a flimsy metal rail

 

in the middle of a lightening storm

 

and we lived to tell the tale.

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