Cold autumn day, it seemed that the weather decided to skip the fall and move right into a cold and bitter rain. Tapping down on the hood of my jacket and my rather-too-pronounced nose. Stinging ever slightly, I was distracted. By the steam exiting my mouth and the whine of a firetruck racing off into the distance. Distraction was taking me, reminding me as cold and bitter as that rain. I was not there. I was half a year ago with a girl I loved, or perhaps didn't. Together, on a twin mattress listening to the patter of a cold, bitter rain tapping on the window.
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