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Abandoned Mine, MT

The mine shaft’s gaping mouth

yawns like the throat of an old, useless god.

Gnats hover by the scattered rocks.

This is real not a set, or a scene,

a spit of dirt shot through the sluice, all things like

a picture cut to kiss my America expectation.

 

In the surrounding bush, tamaracks curve towards the clouds.

The clouds where, above the furry tips of conifers, cataracts

plummet down mountainwalls, and ask:

“afraid?” And I am, I am. I fear the sheer

slopes of tough granite slashing the giant sky

in two; the hard-edged mountain face. The expansive air.

 

And this split is brooding old and unknowable

tunneling briskly into the unfamiliar, bruising

Montana a grisly purple-red

when the sun swings underground

and shades the hot **** by the mine with cool night as

behind it, the mine appears to growl.

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Feb 1, 2010
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