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Comatose

The world is getting smaller Fading chimes and rhyme My heart burned into cinders I'm eaten by the time Hopes are no longer brighter I'm starting to get old One more month of October Years are becoming gold Slumbering as a tamed beast Like an infinite loop With suffer from some disease Uttered by a tight whoop Still ain't got a difference Stakes are high and grounded I must not lose some defense This rain can't strike me dead The treasure map is ready Their eyes have drops of spring The box maybe brought already But I'm not set for dying
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jerald-angelo
Filipino
Published
Sep 29, 2011
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