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Competition

The soft padding of my running feet,

Rhythmically ran at a hypnotic beat.

My legs moved smoothly, forward and back

Propelling me faster, across the race track.

 

A quick glance behind showed that I was in lead,

While the rest of the group tried to quicken their speed.

I focused my run, tried to steady my pace,

I’d a long ways to go, had a long run to race.

 

When all of a sudden I spotted near my side,

A quick paced runner, with a long-legged stride.

He smiled at me like he’d already won,

Yet he looked really happy, like this was great fun!

 

I smoldered inside cause I had to win,

Not some dumb idiot with a stupid looking grin!

I ran ever faster and soon was ahead,

Yet the long-legged runner just laughed and then sped.

And once again he was in lead of the group,

My body felt exhausted and I started to droop.

 

This wasn’t fair; I had to get past him!

Though my lungs were burning and my eyesight was dim.

I barely even noticed when he ran o’er the line,

To win the race, which should have been mine.

 

I realized with a start as I gasped for air,

That though he’d won the race I didn’t even care.

What mattered was that the race had been fun,

And now it was over, now it was done.

 

The thought made me smile put a laugh to my lips,

While I opened my water container and took a few sips.

It wasn’t about competing; I didn’t care if he’d won,

All that really mattered was that I'd had fun!

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Written by
julian-mullins
American
Published
Sep 11, 2011
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30·275
Notes

This was one of the first poems I wrote, and I decided to put it up on the website! It's different than most of my poetry in that it's very light and comedic, although it does have a message in it! I hope you enjoy!

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