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Molly Pendleton
Poems
Sep 2011
Melancholy
A blonde woman sitting on a brick ledge
Is throwing her hands, calloused and raw
The hands of an aging artist
Into seamlessly meshed gestures
Grand but sometimes ridiculous motions
To narrate a story for an amused spectator
She lives for the smiles of her listeners
But lives off the change they drop in her cup
With a bright smile thatβs secretly melancholy
Due to the choice she made; to live a free, happy life
Without the burdens of disappointed onlookers
Completely alone
Would love some feedback on this. It doesn't sound quite right to me but I really like the concept and don't want to just throw it away.
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