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Aug 2011
This day was so good,
But now it is quiet night.
Soon I will see you, Dear.

The troubles of day are gone, Dear.
Now we must focus on only good.
Dream shall we in this minty night.

Bodies harmonized to the motion of the night.
You are my nightingale, Dear.
Eyes close and all is good,

And we whisper, "Good night Dear."
This is a tritina that I wrote as an example for my creative writing class. I liked how it turned out, so I thought that I would post it. :)
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