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by david-flemister

The smudge of ink that is left when a mistake can't be completely erased Just another failed attempt Another rough draft That's what I am I think that if someone were to finish erasing I could be rewritten as something much more beautiful A better version of me A better choice of words Maybe if I could erase myself You could recreate me more beautifully than this first edition You could create me with the abundance of loveliness that you hold Where I am "flawed" You could write me as "fascinating" Where I feel "ignored" You could describe me as "engrossing" Where I am "alone" You could instead write "loved" I want you to change me Mold me Shape me Recreate me Replace me with a better version of myself
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21 / Non-binary
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Written by
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21 / Non-binary
Published
Jun 18, 2015
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