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I sit alone in my room. not unusual for someone like me. I've lost hope, so precious, so pure. So vile, so raw. This heart, it beat for you and you only. And when you left I was lost. I spent so many years searching for the light that lived in your eyes. The spark of your smile, that set the room ablaze. Only to find, That the spark had been drowned In a wave of hatred and bitterness. and vodka. Though I found you, My heart remains lost. Knowing that you are not you, I am not me. My heart beats wildly, and frantically, looking for a way out, a place to hide. And so I make a desicion. 50 asprin layed neatly in row across my kitchen counter. light shines on little opals I find a memory of you and I swallow it, with the pill. burying it deep inside. no way out now. 15 minutes later I am lying on the floor swimming in my own vomit. My heart beats wildly and frantically. And my Heart beating Head spinning I am your smile
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Written by
kelsey-erwin
American
Published
Jul 30, 2011
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62·186
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I started at the end with this. I rambled on a little, was too lazy to do any kind of editing. Probably not worth publishing, but oh well.

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