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Poetic Freestyle 1

Her smile shines throughout the universe They pierce even the darkest realms, my heart, The looks of Ancient Egyptian princesses Simply her deep eyes controlled the masses, They have similar effects on myself, Black ocean currents made of velvet emotions, I'm lost in that ocean one calls hair, Her pale moon-like face calms me every night, It brings out the true side of me, She's a constant reminder of how beautiful this world can be Her abstract mind contorts my reality, Her abstract mind causes me to sit and think while others attempt to solve her A true mystery of nature, No one human can have beauty comparable to Persephone To spend all eternity with her would suit me just fine No other human could exists for all I care My feeling are simple I'm in love with her
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william-jaramillo
American
Published
Jul 14, 2011
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Just typed this out on the spot because I felt like it, comments and criticism welcomed.

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