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Old Jack Daniels

I think I’m crazy

But it’s a feeling that comes and goes

You say I’m lazy

But I really don’t think you know

I’m somewhere in between

But I don’t know what you think I mean

When that old Jack Daniels gets me down

 

I see double

But I love you both the same

If I'm in trouble

Then please let me explain

The drinks were two for one

I didn't think that I'd come undone

but that old Jack Daniels got me down

 

You're my lady

And we really did have some fun

So I'm thinkin' maybe

If you would kindly put down that gun

You and I could talk

Or maybe just take a little walk

Cause' that old Jack Daniel's got me down

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Written by
patrick-mcfarland
American
Published
Jun 20, 2011
Lines·Words
21·126
Notes

This is really more of a song than a poem. I like the lyrics but the flow is a little funky without the tune in mind.

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