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Venus in Boots

Venus in Boots

 

You scared others, but me! Attracted

By what I’m not sure, your hair, eyes, hips.

Maybe it was the *** noodle you were having for lunch

 

My modern day Venus: behind the beauty counter at Boots

Head and shoulder above everybody else,

Even though you were only five foot two

 

I was captivated by your beauty, our eyes met

Then gazing at your full red lips, hearing those

Immortal words, “can I help you sir”.

It was at that moment I realised I do need help.

 

Nights and days I dreamed of Venus in Boots

I longed , not for her body, but her heart.

You in your twenties me in my seventies

The odds were not in my favour.

 

Slowly a relationship formed

You let me hold your hand, smell your neck

No kissing: I bought you things

Earrings , jeans, you asked what colour

I could not resist. Blue!

 

We went for walks , town, country, seaside

The waves crashed. My heart had already crashed

Totally besotted. Even though it was all one sided

I was blissfully happy!

 

As I paddled, I felt tired. As the tide ebbed

So did my life. My final thoughts were of my

Venus in blue jeans, in Boots.

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Jun 15, 2011
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