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a lovely, unappealing work

I sat down today and began to type,

But nothing I said seemed to come out right.

 

The meter was all wrong,

The rhyme scheme was a mess,

The words were too simple,

The stanzas too plain,

 

So I decided to erase it

And start all over again.

 

A few backspaces later,

I started anew,

And with each keystroke,

My frustration grew.

 

My thoughts were garbled

And looked clumsy in print;

My words were childish

And seemed cliche.

 

So I tried one last time

To write something that made sense,

But instead of eloquent rhymes and articulate thoughts

I got ill-expressed musings and awkward phrasings.

Instead of a work of beauty and awe,

I had created a trite piece of junk.

 

And yet, I found attraction in its ungainly expression

And was fascinated by its candor.

Nothing was hidden in dreamy language,

Or couched in metaphors and vague allusions.

 

I was filled with a strange satisfaction

At having created such an unorthodox piece,

That evoked in me the simultaneous feelings

Of looking on a lovely, unappealing work.

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Published
Jan 12, 2010
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