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Commitment

by nutellaneo

Commitment is heavy both on the heart and on the shoulders. Most forget and they crumple under the weight of expectations and romantic moments. Commitment is like carrying you through the sea but not unloading you when things get rough. Sometimes people get confused about which valuables to keep and which to abandon. Commitment is like flying a plane I get to lead and direct us to the beautiful islands. But it's never about me flying it's about you landing and never crashing you.
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Mar 5, 2015
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#love#abandon#commitment
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