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May 2011
It only takes one try,
That one time,
And once you’re hooked,
You can't stop, won't stop,
It's never enough.

You can try all you like,
But you can't stop yourself,
You think about it all the time,
At some point you lose yourself.

The fix for that ecstasy,
The collective unconscious fantasy,
Maybe it's an old primal disease,
This is the Collective Consensus Reality.

It takes one time,
Your first try,
You’re hooked from the first line,
You slip in with a second lie,
A new feature in your life.
Critique & Comment Please.
David Beltran
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David Beltran  Miami
(Miami)   
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