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Let's Not Be Eggs

by kelley-flint

All eggs were in one basket, so no wonder you're reserved ever since they broke. Shells are messy and hard to work with. She gave you eggs the last time. But I'm not her. Let's not give each other eggs. Let's give ourselves bread instead. Because all your bread in a basket sounds warm, picnics in parks on sunny days warm. Or fresh out the oven still steaming hot. Frosted and sweet, or sourdough. All your bread in one basket, there's so much to work with. Even cold bread, and stale bread. Because at least when molding bread falls out of your metaphorical basket you can pick it up in one piece and put it back. Or make more. You can fix it. Eggs aren't that easy. They shatter. They're messy. So my dear let's not be eggs. Let's be bread.
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Feb 12, 2015
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Putting all your eggs in one basket with a relationship. Doesn't that sound so scary? Why do we have to make metaphors so serious.

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