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Someone Like You

yes, of course I know your name

you're the girl who always dances

no matter who might be around

can't forget someone like you

 

you're the girl who always dances

around the house with a smile

can't forget someone like you

a beautiful body like yours, dancing

 

around the house with a smile

I imagined myself with you

a beautiful body like yours, dancing

writhing in ecstasy on my bed

 

I imagined myself with you

breathing your essence as you're

writhing in ecstasy on my bed

my roommate was the lucky fellow

 

breathing your essence as you're

laying wrapped inside his arms

my roommate was the lucky fellow

a treasure locked behind his door

 

laying wrapped inside his arms

you must have glistened like a gem

a treasure locked behind his door

kept hidden from my hungry eyes

 

you must have glistened like a gem

your lusciously pale skin forever

kept hidden from my hungry eyes

oh, how I long to hold and caress

 

your lusciously pale skin forever

no matter who might be around

oh, how I long to hold and caress

yes, of course I know your name

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Written by
winter-kane
Published
Apr 20, 2011
Lines·Words
32·190
Notes

This is a pantoum. It is a[n essentially] never ending series of quatrain stanzas.

Lines 2 and 4 of the first stanza become lines 1 and 3 of the next.

May end with a couplet of lines 1 and 3 from the very first stanza, or using those two lines as 2 and 4 of the last stanza.

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