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Remind Me

You remind me of myself

Broken hearted and hoping

Looking for someone to love

Wishing that I could go back in time

To figure out what went wrong

Trying to fill the holes in my heart

With laughter, hatred, even cement

Anything that will hurt, to remind me that I feel

Anything that will remind me that pain is real

 

You remind me of her

Staring into the open field as the stars come out

Pouring out her every emotion

Wanting me to help her, feel more like herself

To help her find her way in life

Down the broken path that she had chosen

That took her so far away, hours- even days

When she drove away, the misted look in her eye

Told me that I had failed, I couldn't help her survive

 

You remind me of him

We did everything in our power not to give in

Distanced ourselves from eachother, trying to cut the ties

Living seperate lives and falling in love with other people

All because the trust was uneasy, unsure

The way he looked away when I looked him in the eye

Whenver I said goodbye, because he hated those words

His hands trembling as he took a chance to live on his own

Calling me to remind me, that I wasn't alone

 

You remind me of them

The distant people from my past

Good and bad, happy and sad- cliche as that is, you do

You read my every movement, my every word

Like I'm some book that needs to be figured out

Or maybe you think you've already got me down

You overthink my simple words, and underthink my sentences

My emotions seeping out like blood

I'm not the person you think I am, I'm everything but that

 

You remind me of me

You remind me of her

You remind me of them

You remind me of everyone but yourself these days

 

I don't know if it's me- or if it happens to be you

But everytime you move, I see someone else

Maybe I'm hallucinating; Or maybe I'm just going crazy

But if I told that I thought you were being you

I'd be lying- but I'll be longing for the day

You keep your own identity, and I'll be whispering

 

You remind me of you

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Written by
stephanie-carlson
American
Published
Apr 15, 2011
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