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The sun, in comparison

I woke this day

greeted by sun:

warm, brilliant, present

 

ray lashed out from mighty orb,

travelling far to find my eye,

yet meek -

patient until paid more heed than dreams

 

but though the dawn was blonde,

and radiance brushed my skin,

 

still it paled

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clint-rhea
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Apr 14, 2011
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