sing song poems make me mad reading rhyming prose is sort of sad thinking it is so clever to come up with similar sounds in my eyes, you’ve been had – some eight grade writing teacher gave you ****** advice and now you can’t get rid of it, like dealing with head lice stuck in the same old rut, just sort of hanging around if it were up to me I would put your hand in a vice – there is a man, they call Dr. Seuss after his books, rhyming stopped being of use he would make up words that no one had ever found but, when I read your “love, dove”, “mine, fine”…it seems like abuse – if only you allowed yourself the freedom to really shine leave all those templates and standard structure behind pull the corn cob out of your *** and try to get unwound it is my contention that you might find some piece of mind – the problem is that we can all go on like this all day never really presenting ourselves as if we have something to say following the mold, adding to the mound if only I could inspire you all we might find a poetic brand new day – I doubt it, and I am sure I will continue to read this trash probably, stupid rhyming couplets are the only way to make some cash but thinking of that just makes me want to hang my head down **** the wheel into oncoming traffic, cause a horrendous car crash – of course, this is the way of things and I might as well be spitting into the wind no one will listen and tomorrow will be the same thing again I will look it over and wonder what it is like to drowned ….shuffle back into the darkness, consider if I have just sinned –