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Adventure

You promised to take me to the woods and sleep with me under the stars, You promised me an adventure, And by God you took me on one- You weaved me through forest just trying to find you, Searching for your remnants in the fallen leaves and branches scattered across the forest floor You led me to a tall tree where I could carve our names into the wood, as selfish as that was, And deface beautiful Mother Nature because I thought our love was also as breathtaking as she. Our love was breathtaking- You whisked me away and ran us to the tops of mountains. You took me to peaks where I felt alive, And valleys where I felt so down to earth I could've melted into the paths we paved The same way I did every time your arms wrapped around my waist And your head rested on my shoulder, And you whispered in my ears about how you didn't want to be anywhere else. I jumped rocks and cliffs with you, Falling so hard and fast the same way I did Any time you looked at me with those patient eyes, Any time you found the time to hold me and love me in any way you could muster. I fell into water and your sea eyes any time I jumped; You made me fall so damn hard. You took me to the edges of sunsets That never rivaled the way your smile shined When I told you I loved you, Or rivaled the way your face looked when you laughed. You had Mother Nature beat when it came to beauty. You had me beat when I tried to find a reason to be upset you never actually took me on an adventure like you promised, Maybe because falling in love with you was an adventure all in itself; You left me blistered, aching and sore. But I left you with the world in my eyes, the sea dripping from them, The mountains weighing on my heart And the shores soaking my soul because venturing into your world meant I had left my own, And it took me so much damn time trying to find a path back to mine. You took me for one hell of an adventure, And the paths you treaded left footprints in my heart That are blown away but aren't forgotten. You promised to take me out to see the sights and walk the world- Falling in love with you took me for an adventure that you didn't plan for, And one I couldn't sustain much longer. That's the thing about you, us, adventures- They're thrilling and beautiful, Breathtaking and wild. They come to an end though, And the adventure you took me on stained me with a sense of wanderlust you'll never come to see or know.
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Mgpe
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Jan 4, 2015
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I used to be pissed at myself for writing about Greg, but I don't really care anymore. I know in myself that whatever happened is done, and that's fine. I still find so much inspiration in our relationship, and writing about it leaves me with work I'm proud of. I like this piece. To hell with the fact it's about Greg. Relationships never really leave you, even when it's all said and done. This is my way of learning from it even if it's all over.

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