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Mixing your whisky breath, your unshaven cheeks, your liquored-down smile in an orange bottle labeled B. WITHDRAWAL withdrawal withdrawal Advice from a man with unshaven cheeks, a ring around his eye, and a cross near his breast. *Withdrawal from him, be careful, withdrawal from him you’ll see.* Clenched fists and a bouncing ball of hair, tied, atop my head Sundays are slow, a holy ****** awaits. They teach we aren’t supposed to be here. They teach this is not home. Everyone is temporary, and the concept of forever: my methadone. But he’s only a pain reliever, you see.
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Dec 19, 2014
Dec 19, 2014 at 10:28 PM UTC
(i wish i had enough energy to finish this, but i'm in too much pain)
Mixing your whisky breath, your unshaven cheeks, your liquored-down smile in an orange bottle labeled B. WITHDRAWAL withdrawal withdrawal Advice from a man with unshaven cheeks, a ring around his eye, and a cross near his breast. *Withdrawal from him, be careful, withdrawal from him you’ll see.* Clenched fists and a bouncing ball of hair, tied, atop my head Sundays are slow, a holy ****** awaits. They teach we aren’t supposed to be here. They teach this is not home. Everyone is temporary, and the concept of forever: my methadone. But he’s only a pain reliever, you see.
This isn't finished at all. I wish I had the energy to revise and edit. Or even write, but I don't anymore.
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Dec 19, 2014
Dec 19, 2014 at 10:28 PM UTC
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