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Atlantis

by erin-suurkoivu

Break me into chasm then let the love pour in— flower into deep well— stem the umbilicus of what you could say you knew of me— the privilege of living inside your own head— and me, something made of sand, a wink— something of one of many lives ago, though how well you knew me— as did he— how well they saw me— and maybe no one did. We were lovers in a past life. And now I am obscure as lost Atlantis, origin of the fairy tale— fragile as gossamer and the Holy Grail.
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For You?
Written by
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Published
Oct 30, 2019
Time
2m
Notes

This poem came about after seeing somebody I used to know on Facebook making a comment on a mutual friend's wall.

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#chasm#breakme#umbilicus#privilege#knowingsomeone#knewmewhen#obscure#ghost#atlantis#holygrail
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