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The Tin Warrior

The tin warrior,

Stands tall and strong,

His creator looks in horror,

As his new creation has gone terribly wrong.

 

The tin warrior was suppose to have no heart,

But no, he came out with a part,

The tin warrior was the key to victory,

Now who ever wins the war is a pure mystery,

Who do they blame for this new creation?

Obviously the one who created all this frustration!

 

The tin warrior has a half a heart,

Not the best, but it is a start,

Instead of stone cold,

It became pure gold,

Only one person knows why,

And it most certainly wasn't the creator guy.

 

The daughter of the creator,

She was the one,

She may be a traitor,

But she knows what she had done.

 

The tin warrior was better than a weapon,

The daughter knew that,

She doesn't regret her choices for a second,

The tin warrior was even better than her father was aiming at.

 

The tin warrior was build for peace,

His sword pure white,

Not a speck of blood upon it,

To walk he used all his might,

To keep his heart pumping,

He struggled greatly,

What the daughter witnessed,

Make her quite shaky.

 

You see, a heart was meant for man,

And the tin warrior just wasn't it,

The tin warrior went out with a plan,

So he left a dent in this world,

Letting himself shut down,

Knowing his plan was unfurled,

 

Everything would be fine without him,

As he did his part,

The daughter was grim,

But knew this was just the start,

The tin warrior saved many souls,

And now it was her turn to achieve the tin warriors goals.

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KittenQU
Published
Feb 16, 2015
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