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5 Days and a wake up

by @josias-barrios

*The day arrived and I thought you would not be there, I held my breath for so long, waiting to see if you would decide to come along on this adventure, when I saw your bright eyes looking into mine nothing else matter. I wanted to make this journey one that you would never forget, one that you would cherish til your last day on this earth, one that would show you how our lives could be if you chose to be with me. Watching you smile, holding my hand, telling me that it was the most amazing time of your life is all it took for me to completely fall into your arms and never want to let go, now I'm holding my breath hoping that it won't be longer than five days and a wake for you to tell me what I want to hear... that you want to spend the rest of your life with me.*
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Guatemalan
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Written by
josias-barrios
Guatemalan
Published
Aug 3, 2012
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