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Blanket Fort (Not a Poem)

by william-welch-king

Our love was like that blanket fort, your mom told you to take it down but we liked it so it stayed up. Later you wanted another in the fort that was built for two and it came crashing down on top of us. I decided to let it be and accept it's failure. We tried to live with out it. The blankets were still out and tempted us with every look, you finally asked me to rebuild with you. After hesitation, I saw it brought you joy and that's all I wanted. We had a tough time getting it to stay up on its own but once we did it wasn't bad, just not the same. The inside was smaller and was much more cramped. We realized how much it had actually changed though outside it looked roughly the same, and no matter what we did we couldn't get it back. The first great fort was gone and it was time to take this one down, for it caused us too much frustration and too many tears. Our blanket fort was taken down and it seemed like all that work was for nothing. Yet now we can build something more permanent and learn from our mistakes. Hopefully to each find that person who's blankets keep us warm. w.j.w.k
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Written by
william-welch-king
Chicago, IL, United State
For You?
Written by
william-welch-king
Chicago, IL, United State
Published
Apr 29, 2015
Time
2m
Notes

I'm sorry this isn't a poem but it was something I spent a lot of time on and thought I should share.

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