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ALL THE WAY DOWN THE LINE

by @donall-dempsey

ALL THE WAY DOWN THE LINE Yes, I have forgotten you are dead and turn to you: "Did you see that?" But Death has stolen your eyes. So you see nothing. Bits and pieces of you vanishing day by day as if you are being erased. I still cling onto your smile. Death isn't having that. And I am still in possession of your voice. It's tone the slant of it the heft of a syllable a last few remaining phrases. I still talk to you. Ask your opinion. "The red or the blue?" Your ghost smiles plays along with the charade. I hear you say ( in my voice ) as if sound could be forged this counterfeit you. "Oh the red...the red all the time all the way down the line!" *** How the presence of a loved one can still exist in the everyday...mingling with the moments of your own life. We are big Man Utd fans and one day when they were playing Chelsea he pretended we didn't know who was who and playfully posed the question....the red or the blue...to which there could only be one answer...."Oh the red...the red all the time all the way down the line!"
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