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Frigid winds pushed up against my car, and then I saw you come inside. Those chestnut eyes that had been gone for so long. My enraged thoughts were quickly unraveled because just a simple moment with you was worth a thousand days. But, the feelings didn't last very long. The car swiftly became a space filled with words that were never said and words that would always be dismaying. All I wanted was to understand but that wasn't a part of your plan. I wanted you to come back for more then just an obligatory visit. Why couldn't you come back? For now, though, we'll drive to my house filled with laughter and lies. See? I'm smiling. We're doing fine.
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Oct 21, 2018
Oct 21, 2018 at 12:25 PM UTC
See? I'm Smiling
Frigid winds pushed up against my car, and then I saw you come inside. Those chestnut eyes that had been gone for so long. My enraged thoughts were quickly unraveled because just a simple moment with you was worth a thousand days. But, the feelings didn't last very long. The car swiftly became a space filled with words that were never said and words that would always be dismaying. All I wanted was to understand but that wasn't a part of your plan. I wanted you to come back for more then just an obligatory visit. Why couldn't you come back? For now, though, we'll drive to my house filled with laughter and lies. See? I'm smiling. We're doing fine.
This was a poem I wrote a very long time ago but I could never post because I tried submitting it somewhere and it took months for them to get back to me. I was rejected but now I have the chance to post it here. I hope you enjoy it.
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25/Gender Fluid/Space
Oct 21, 2018
Oct 21, 2018 at 12:25 PM UTC
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