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I am but a rose of beginning green, imprisoned to darkness all day, within a monumental fiend, who covers up the radiance that I want to give away Occasionally a small opening would be sewn into the darkness' fiery grasp and your pure radiance could be shown concealed in a kindhearted mask Share your light with me and for you I will light the way wrapped in an unfamiliar livery prepared for our intimacy till the end of our days We will cross waters on a homebound stretch and become fuel for our endurance, so beautifully etched I'll take my chances, following the sun the garden we grow means that together, we are one Share your light with me, and forever I will stay. my petals can become your livery we need each other, I daresay.
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Jan 31, 2017
Jan 31, 2017 at 8:51 PM UTC
Dear Lorenzo,
I am but a rose of beginning green, imprisoned to darkness all day, within a monumental fiend, who covers up the radiance that I want to give away Occasionally a small opening would be sewn into the darkness' fiery grasp and your pure radiance could be shown concealed in a kindhearted mask Share your light with me and for you I will light the way wrapped in an unfamiliar livery prepared for our intimacy till the end of our days We will cross waters on a homebound stretch and become fuel for our endurance, so beautifully etched I'll take my chances, following the sun the garden we grow means that together, we are one Share your light with me, and forever I will stay. my petals can become your livery we need each other, I daresay.
This poem was written for a class, and I will be turning it in soon. Tips/Comments/Suggestions are greatly appreciated!
elise-t
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Jan 31, 2017
Jan 31, 2017 at 8:51 PM UTC
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