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Astronomy: A Love I Could Never Have

by MaanvinderPilania

everyone is going to their place of dream their pen and papers screams pride and dignity and in the fate's script it only talks about my failure my efforts led me to nowhere but my defeat i'm envious of everyone who got to follow their dreams i learnt about the stars, galaxies and cosmos so one day i could steal a portion of their shine to add in my name learnt a language to study in a foreign land but my dreams collapsed, i cried, i state
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MaanvinderPilania
21 / M / India
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Written by
MaanvinderPilania
21 / M / India
Published
Sep 2, 2025
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Written on- May 20, 2024

This is the original version of my poem "Cosmic Longing: Un Amore Irragguiungible" that i re-wrote on July 24, 2025 because i thought my message was not clear in this piece. But now that i think about it, that certainly was the most confusing version of this poem i had wrote. Even though the message is same, i treat this one poem as different. It speaks of the heartbreak the earlier one failed to speak.

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