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Terrified Written in cursive Behind your eyes The messy braided hair Is all that's left of you Standing in a white dress It was seventy degrees outside You shut the window "I'm sorry," Your handwriting just vexed me Your pen had too much ink Your toenails were broken The white page turned to gaping black As you crossed out the words I closed the door and walked away You said you felt some sort of chill, and I believed you Must have been a gap between the stark walls and the blanched window frame I found you a blanket
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Feb 27, 2018
Feb 27, 2018 at 3:36 PM UTC
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Terrified Written in cursive Behind your eyes The messy braided hair Is all that's left of you Standing in a white dress It was seventy degrees outside You shut the window "I'm sorry," Your handwriting just vexed me Your pen had too much ink Your toenails were broken The white page turned to gaping black As you crossed out the words I closed the door and walked away You said you felt some sort of chill, and I believed you Must have been a gap between the stark walls and the blanched window frame I found you a blanket
I thought about adding the quote, "Hospital gowns never fit like they should. We yelled at the nurse, didn't do any good," from "Long Way From Home," by the Lumineers, but I thought I would let the poem go by itself. Not enough people have hear that song. Feel free to imaginarily add it after the line "Your toenails were broken" Please comment :)
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Feb 27, 2018
Feb 27, 2018 at 3:36 PM UTC
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