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Naked eye.

Naked eye,

silent sorrounded heart.

 

what's that sound?

elderly and ancient crown

from a spirit beyond recognition.

 

a vast dark room

comfortable crouching,

no hope,

no light,

yet he takes a glance into my soul.

 

Naked eye,

he sees through me

directly to my soul

his silence seems to claim;

 

"poor pretentious soldier",

"come home",

"come home"...

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Written by
antonio-fonseca
Published
Feb 28, 2014
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17·57
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#love#depression#eyes#sadness#sorrow#madness#down#naked#eye#nakedness
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