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Counting Hamid

by @theunfeelinghuman

When you came into my life I stopped counting words fears and doubts I still have them, but then I also have you. Counting is a strange thing I can count my books (I have a lot of them) I can count your poems (You have a lot of them) I can count the years we've lived (May we live more, together) I can count my qualities And I can count my scars I can count the events which changed me I might even be able to count yours I can even count the stars If I set my mind to it It seems more possible Than counting the goodness Which you have in you I cannot count the smiles you've given me (They are more than the stars) I cannot count the advice you've given me (I hold it close to heart) I cannot count the love you have for me (It makes me laugh and cry when I try) I cannot count the time I want to spend with you (The conventions of hours won't accept it) I cannot count your person (You hold too much inside you) Your depth and your beauty (And everything that doesn't have a name) So since I fell in love with you, Hamid I've discovered that I don't try counting Numbers lost their meaning And I've never been good at math anyway.
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