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You always mention Sylvia Plath. I think you want to be like her, But your poetry’s just not up to scratch. You idealise her suicide Her torment becomes your own. Relish in the thought That in death you will achieve some kind of success. Yet in death you will still be alone.
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Jan 25, 2016
Jan 25, 2016 at 9:14 AM UTC
Sylvia P Wannabe
You always mention Sylvia Plath. I think you want to be like her, But your poetry’s just not up to scratch. You idealise her suicide Her torment becomes your own. Relish in the thought That in death you will achieve some kind of success. Yet in death you will still be alone.
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Jan 25, 2016
Jan 25, 2016 at 9:14 AM UTC
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