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The Becoming of an Atlas

by justan-rahming

[part 1 - The Depending of Rescue] I've waited so long for you to take me to the place where light came through all this time I thought you would save me But together we were stuck in this dark sea Myself so lost in this tearing tide only to find, I was not alone inside fighting the waves to get free growing powers grew deep down in me [part 2 - Becoming Atlas] Im out into the sky beyond the stars looking down at the land so far lost souls still trapped behind I came back for you, I have to find Spend my life searching and saving to stop my heart from this painful raging help those stand on the land I have found your still lost in the black, quiet is the sound I see your eyes, so bright as the brightest night star Drifting away from my hand, floating so far Ive spent my life so long to bring you to shore I cannot stop its what I'm existing for [part 3 - The Distraction] In search for you I have saved so much millions have felt my graceful touch they plead for me to guide them away So many I lead to see a new day Shining light over their homes making them feel the warmth in their souls Starting a future that they can live in But with all my power, I cannot find where you've been bound by duties you slip away from me away from view, and deeper into the sea The older I grow the more of you I miss but all these feelings I am forced to dismiss [Part 4 - Atlas Relinquished] Strength has raged within in my blood my veins are dried while my emotions flood away from my heart into the night tired by the constant shine of light Broken labored hands are laid to rest after long years of might's test exasperation falls over my will want nothing more to forever be still I can no longer help to build I lay slowly upon the field body and soul unable to lift watching the world, still, it sits
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Feb 18, 2013
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