Hello PoetryVoting

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsListsHeartedHistoryMy WritingNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsListsHeartedHistoryMy WritingNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Our Eternity

by nowhat45

Aim high wont you? These arms followed an angle close to you, than right. That diamond eyes, peered once, before the setter of our struggle. The karmas misled the merits, And the merits with decisions. A tension teasing, lovemaking questions, Sowed beneath burnt-up fields beside a road. The smoke’s precision upon its smudging air, That tears it open, that leads across unwoven. And our eternity shreds a speck of little dignity. My dignity that shared a speck upon our eternity. A steam kissed and ate the air-flux. A rough chill! Singeing our eyes to let free—Yet we hugged the same pillow in the fire; And diamond shards fell beneath your cheek, peering at the setter. Do not cry, beloved. I will save your life: Impairing the merits that misled us, The decisions that misled us.
Request permission to use this poem
n
Written by
nowhat45
16 / M / Neg. Occ., Philippines
For You?
n
Written by
nowhat45
16 / M / Neg. Occ., Philippines
Published
Jan 27, 2025
Time
1m
Permission

Request to use this poem

Tell nowhat45 how you would like to use it. We review requests before forwarding them.

AboutBlogSupportFAQPrivacyTermsContact
© 2009-2026 Hello Poetry/v27.0 [production] by @eliotyork
Explore
Hello PoetryVoting
Write