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Rusting Away

by MaanvinderPilania

in scene one, i was at the top, then the camera glitches in scene two, i was in the motion of free fall now all i can do is write about my pain, that's how my days rusted and all of it is now in vain i didn't held the ropes tight and i fell on the ground it all feels so nostalgic, thinking about last year i was working hard, giving blood and tears for 'golden days' that deserted me away
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MaanvinderPilania
21 / M / India
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Written by
MaanvinderPilania
21 / M / India
Published
2d ago
Time
1m
Notes

This poem is part of "Fire in My Dreamland: A Poetry Series", which is about the loss of a dream.

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#dream#grief
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