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train journey bits #1

*what forests are those we pass, blazing along the railway tracks, a tree bloom of still cranes, stream black of rubbish bane, stench of dead city rubble, factories of rusted cast metal, distant cotton twilight skies, sun slide across a bunch of wires,     passing tunnels echo lonely platforms, frantic gecko, looming hillside, crackle dry wood fire, a god barred in lock&key,  blink glimpse of the sea  one rush of vision, pebble fling at frisson, metal-crunch rhythm, grind music sublime, spark, grunt, grate, we arrive, we dissipate...*
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snehith-kumbla
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Published
Aug 22, 2016
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24·86
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(As experienced on a train journey undertaken in December 2014)

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#journey#travel#train#destination#railways
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