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"i love you"

I do not mind my walls falling, crumbling, being overrun; you are a compassionate conqueror, and there is sweetness in surrender, safety in your reign. Within blankets like dunes of snow, we lie surrounded by words not said, yet felt and known and understood. The earth moves around the sun, and the moon pulls water across oceans, and you are beautiful. It is true every minute of every day, and I know it. I suspect the stars also align at your will, but you have told me they dance in my eyes; and reality is flexible and water-slick in the morning hours before the sun. You reign me in to fit into the present but let my soul fly unguarded and unchained; you let my heart dance with yours yet to its own beat. Luminous supernovas and galaxies flutter over your face, reflect on the bridge of your nose, cast shadows and brightness. I am at a loss for words; this universe, or maybe the language I share with you, that isn't mine, does not have the words, is not enough to describe you, and who you are, your significance and what you mean - I can think of three, and they dance on my tongue. - "i love you" cs
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May 19, 2017
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