Hello PoetryVoting

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsListsHeartedHistoryMy WritingNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsListsHeartedHistoryMy WritingNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Inside and Outside

by alan-black

You don't get it, pen pal nonsense and all that is a dead end road, with fifty foot cliffs on each side. You're on the inside, and I'm on the outside. The grubs, and needy feelies need you. You cannot be alone, and I am a loner. Is it recognition of your quality that you desire, well, I thought I gave that. Or, perhaps its a companion, to stay with you through the long and lonesome nights, a lover for your life and nothing more... Well, it ain't me babe. I have, do, and will love you, but, I cannot climb the wall anymore, I don't like what has become of the inside. So, do the right thing. Look around you, pick your poison, and drink it. Because I nearly died climbing over that wall. And, I will not do it again. But, If I pass by the place, in the hollow hours, I will whisper through the cracks, and stick my fingers through the holes. And, if your not busy, and your hands aren't tied, we can hold hands at the gate. Until the guards drive me off, and drag you back to your cell.
Request permission to use this poem
a
Written by
alan-black
For You?
a
Written by
alan-black
Published
Sep 29, 2014
Time
2m
Notes

This is about peer pressure, and the prison of the in crowd. People will sacrifice so much to be popular, and it is sad seeing someone you love throw away their free thought in order to fit in. I tried fitting in, but I'm happier being a loner.

Permission

Request to use this poem

Tell alan-black how you would like to use it. We review requests before forwarding them.

AboutBlogSupportFAQPrivacyTermsContact
© 2009-2026 Hello Poetry/v27.0 [production] by @eliotyork
Explore
Hello PoetryVoting
Write