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California

I found your flaws first: your thin, wispy hair, the arch in your back, that slightly crooked nose. And you found mine: following a girl who took my heart and the air right from my lungs. She'd wring me dry till my veins were scarred purple, caked with pale red dust. While you and I laid on the floor in the dark, planning our escape to California as we had always done, I realized the mistake I made by not loving you first.
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danny-c
32 / M / American
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danny-c
32 / M / American
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Jun 6, 2013
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