I’m sharing another short poem written by me in 2016. :)
Hope you enjoy reading it.
In the land of my dreams
You were my hero.
My beloved, source of my joy
Someone with whom
Life seemed to be complete.
Nothing was easy
Yet everything looked so wonderful
You, me and idea of being "we"
Prettiest feelings and you.
Never realised how far I'd come
It was just a heavy flow of love
That carried me away
Dipped into your thoughts
Silly me! kept moving happily.
Until, you wake me up
and...asked, “Hey!! Are we friends?”
Criticism appreciated :)
Jun 21, 2018
Jun 21, 2018 at 2:45 AM UTC
I’m sharing another short poem written by me in 2016. :)
Hope you enjoy reading it.
In the land of my dreams
You were my hero.
My beloved, source of my joy
Someone with whom
Life seemed to be complete.
Nothing was easy
Yet everything looked so wonderful
You, me and idea of being "we"
Prettiest feelings and you.
Never realised how far I'd come
It was just a heavy flow of love
That carried me away
Dipped into your thoughts
Silly me! kept moving happily.
Until, you wake me up
and...asked, “Hey!! Are we friends?”
Criticism appreciated :)
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