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I once found a rose That drew me to it's beauty I knew I had to take it for my own I yearned to possess it earnestly Without hesitation I jumped in I grabbed it with all I have Wanting it truly with all my heart Praying sincerely to own it wholly I held on to it vigourously So that no one can steal it from me Tightening my grasp onto it As if I could never want anything more I didn't mind holding on to it I wouldn't exchange it for anything in the world And yet others kept telling me to let go As they saw my hands bleeding badly I saw it before it even bled this badly I knew that things would turn for the worst And yet my desire took over my reason And wounded myself from the thorns it has As I contemplated my own pain I saw the pain I was causing this rose She suffocated under my grasp She was dying under my care I knew what I have to do And yet I held on to it tight Thinking that it was mine And yet my hands said otherwise Now I'm stuck in a dilemma Should I still hold on and both get hurt Or do I let go and let it grow on its own? Do I say goodbye and just give up on it? No matter how much I love it If I continue this, I'll continue bleeding And she'll continue suffocating How do I let her go?
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Mar 9, 2019
Mar 9, 2019 at 3:01 PM UTC
Rose
I once found a rose That drew me to it's beauty I knew I had to take it for my own I yearned to possess it earnestly Without hesitation I jumped in I grabbed it with all I have Wanting it truly with all my heart Praying sincerely to own it wholly I held on to it vigourously So that no one can steal it from me Tightening my grasp onto it As if I could never want anything more I didn't mind holding on to it I wouldn't exchange it for anything in the world And yet others kept telling me to let go As they saw my hands bleeding badly I saw it before it even bled this badly I knew that things would turn for the worst And yet my desire took over my reason And wounded myself from the thorns it has As I contemplated my own pain I saw the pain I was causing this rose She suffocated under my grasp She was dying under my care I knew what I have to do And yet I held on to it tight Thinking that it was mine And yet my hands said otherwise Now I'm stuck in a dilemma Should I still hold on and both get hurt Or do I let go and let it grow on its own? Do I say goodbye and just give up on it? No matter how much I love it If I continue this, I'll continue bleeding And she'll continue suffocating How do I let her go?
Hey. It's been a while.. Hope you like this piece.. An analogy of a rose and love.. Thanks! -J ❤ RMIV
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30/M/Philippines
Mar 9, 2019
Mar 9, 2019 at 3:01 PM UTC
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