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Susie watches Polly walk along the kitchen tray in hand eyes peering Mrs Gripe moaning Susie'd watched Polly get out of the bed that morning in their shared room in the attic freezing cold watched her go to the basin and pour cold water into the bowl and taking off her nightdress (faded blue) began to wash face and neck and arms all the time shivering cursing under her breath Susie'd studied the body shiver the legs the arms move the bottom move then Polly turned and said come on get up get your **** out of bed don't lay there like some ****** princess now she watches as Polly puts the tray on the side beside her and look at her her eyes searching Mrs Gripe(the cook) saying Susie girl get a move on with that washing up there's more to do after that Susie nods and washes up quicker and Polly says Master George maybe here today and you know what that means Susie nods and looks at Polly as she moves away the black and white uniform the hips swaying the hair pushed under the white headpiece and o yes she knows what that means she'll sleep alone most of the night while Polly's having it away with Master George while I'm hugging myself against the cold she looks back as Polly goes by Mrs Gripe getting orders her backside swaying side to side o Susie muses if only it was me she was getting all excited about not him and a wave of darkness comes over her dull and dim.
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Jan 12, 2016
Jan 12, 2016 at 3:00 AM UTC
DULL AND DIM 1916.
Susie watches Polly walk along the kitchen tray in hand eyes peering Mrs Gripe moaning Susie'd watched Polly get out of the bed that morning in their shared room in the attic freezing cold watched her go to the basin and pour cold water into the bowl and taking off her nightdress (faded blue) began to wash face and neck and arms all the time shivering cursing under her breath Susie'd studied the body shiver the legs the arms move the bottom move then Polly turned and said come on get up get your **** out of bed don't lay there like some ****** princess now she watches as Polly puts the tray on the side beside her and look at her her eyes searching Mrs Gripe(the cook) saying Susie girl get a move on with that washing up there's more to do after that Susie nods and washes up quicker and Polly says Master George maybe here today and you know what that means Susie nods and looks at Polly as she moves away the black and white uniform the hips swaying the hair pushed under the white headpiece and o yes she knows what that means she'll sleep alone most of the night while Polly's having it away with Master George while I'm hugging myself against the cold she looks back as Polly goes by Mrs Gripe getting orders her backside swaying side to side o Susie muses if only it was me she was getting all excited about not him and a wave of darkness comes over her dull and dim.
A KITCHEN MAID AND HER SECRET JEALOUSY IN LONDON IN 1916.
TerryCollett
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Jan 12, 2016
Jan 12, 2016 at 3:00 AM UTC
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