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You remind me of an onion. As the layers peel away, I struggle not to cry 'cos you're just the same inside- and in your heartless little way you blinded me with love, enough to make me stay- to cut you up in little pieces and chew you like "Take that, you frickin' onion"
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Apr 12, 2015
Apr 12, 2015 at 2:14 PM UTC
Onion
You remind me of an onion. As the layers peel away, I struggle not to cry 'cos you're just the same inside- and in your heartless little way you blinded me with love, enough to make me stay- to cut you up in little pieces and chew you like "Take that, you frickin' onion"
Day 12 of NaPoWriMo. I'm definitely deleting this one after the month is over...I just feel silly today.
brittlebird
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Apr 12, 2015
Apr 12, 2015 at 2:14 PM UTC
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