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We live in a broken carousel, in the middle of a long time empty festival. The old wooden horses go up and down on and on, and everything spins once more, and once again, while the horses slowly lose their paint. Every so long, a carpenter comes and replaces a horse with a new and shiny little pony, who learns to go up and down, revolving around, from the old and worn other horses. And so the carousel can go on spinning, young little ponies turn into old worn horses that wait to be replaced. But never, in this ancient cycle, not a single time has the central column that everything revolves around been replaced, or even examined by anybody. And if someone did look at it, they would see that no single horse has ever been more worn than this column, center of all. No, no one has, and so the carousel goes on spinning without clients or even tickets.
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Apr 2
Apr 2, 2026 at 5:43 AM UTC
A broken carousel
We live in a broken carousel, in the middle of a long time empty festival. The old wooden horses go up and down on and on, and everything spins once more, and once again, while the horses slowly lose their paint. Every so long, a carpenter comes and replaces a horse with a new and shiny little pony, who learns to go up and down, revolving around, from the old and worn other horses. And so the carousel can go on spinning, young little ponies turn into old worn horses that wait to be replaced. But never, in this ancient cycle, not a single time has the central column that everything revolves around been replaced, or even examined by anybody. And if someone did look at it, they would see that no single horse has ever been more worn than this column, center of all. No, no one has, and so the carousel goes on spinning without clients or even tickets.
Capitalism? Education? Health (in some places)? Our society's systems for a lot of things are simply broken, yet the powerful don't change them. ------------ Copyright: Shattentraumer, 2026. Licensed under CC BY-NC-SA 4.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/4.0/). Original: https://hellopoetry.com/poems/5284116/a-broken-carousel
Shattentraumer
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Apr 2
Apr 2, 2026 at 5:43 AM UTC
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