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We live in a broken carousel, in the middle of a long time empty festival. The old wooden horses go up and down on and on, and everything spins once more, and once again, while the horses slowly lose their paint. Every so long, a carpenter comes and replaces a horse with a new and shiny little pony, who learns to go up and down, revolving around, from the old and worn other horses. And so the carousel can go on spinning, young little ponies turn into old worn horses that wait to be replaced. But never, in this ancient cycle, not a single time has the central column that everything revolves around been replaced, or even examined by anybody. And if someone did look at it, they would see that no single horse has ever been more worn than this column, center of all. No, no one has, and so the carousel goes on spinning without clients or even tickets.
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Apr 2
Apr 2, 2026 at 5:43 AM UTC
A broken carousel
My mind is a carousel, spinning round and round, never staying still, my thoughts and emotions, a dizzying whirl each ride a struggle, a test of will. The music plays, a constant hum, A reminder of the turmoil to come, the lights blur together, a colorful haze, as I try to find my way through this daze. The horses gallop, a frantic pace, each one a state of worry, of fear, of a troubled space. The swings rise high, a soaring flight, but crash back down, into the dark at night. I search for a way to slow the ride, to step off the carousel, stand aside, to find some peace, some calm, some rest, but the music plays on and I'm stuck in this test. Yet still I hold on, through the twists and turns, and pray for a moment, when the ride learns, to slow its pace, and let me breathe, and find my footing on solid ground beneath.
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Mar 13
Mar 13, 2026 at 9:28 PM UTC
Carousel
My continued experience with the NHS is the sense that, no one is listening or fixing. If at all possible go private, tell them what you want investigating and fixing. A national health hospital is not going to cure you for, “A patient cured is a customer lost!; Instead, of fixing you, “Big farmer” will crudely manage your symptoms, with drugs, at a cost and send you home in prolonged agony. It’s a lucrative carousel !
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Feb 22
Feb 22, 2026 at 10:28 AM UTC
NHS CAROUSEL.
the elegances of minutiae, the grandeur of detail ******** inspired by m vogel https://hellopoetry.com/poem/5097839/airborne-part-i/ &&&&&&& perhaps, unlikely, unwittingly your fingertips bring you to a familiarity, stumbling into a new door, taken by the intricate intrigue of any of: name, style, handwriting, overlapping language and sometimes pure chance, impure luck, leads one to a poem, that soddens your soul, the elegances of minutiae, the grandeur of detail, the rendering of pain so swelling in a heart, where loss is everything and then there is absence,   and though a life can be voided, a poem is forever, for it lives in a land of luck of the draw and you read this poem above, and you are airborne into a deeper sea depth that makes the chest arrest, the legs limp, the intensity of the details insist one clutches his neck to ascertain that the choking will not be permanent this falling into a poem bedevils me, and tells me the road ahead so open, so wide, scarcely touched by footsteps, and return you do for a second tasting, a third emulsion, and though you leave another's poem, the heaviness of chest informs yourself, this is now part of my baggage that cannot be be ever lost, but will go round and round the luggage carousel till it is your turn to take it home Sept. 23, 2025
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Oct 11, 2025
Oct 11, 2025 at 10:31 AM UTC
the elegances of minutiae, the grandeur of detail, on the now empty canvas
The merry-go-round dances on its wheels, swinging -- around its axis.
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Dec 2, 2024
Dec 2, 2024 at 4:00 AM UTC
[ The merry-go-round ]
The more I try The more I fail A cattywampus scale Creating this personalized Dollar general designer hell A fiery well I'm always drawn back to In a spell And I keep mindlessly pushing Circling like a carousel Why pray tell? I couldn't tell But I'll tell you what, If you know someone buying souls I'd be willing to sell If they pay well ©2024
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Nov 17, 2024
Nov 17, 2024 at 3:39 PM UTC
~•§•~ Willing to Sell ~•§•~
From the swing; the playground, when the mind is clear as honeyed water, there, ever on the road goes, slithering into the shadows of the sleeping horizon, and when my feet were big enough to fill the muddied shoes, I sauntered, then walked, then trudged, until my toes were nailed to the asphalt, until I came upon where the road has crumbled, its debris scattered. And stood this body, two sizes too big for this tiny soul, swathed in layers of expectations, dragging sagging lumps of age around past this old carnival. Forsaken years in the rear view mirror once painted with life, proud stallions here, stand still and gray, golden poles tarnished, Their hand crafted eyes wide-open, staring through the smudged glass mirror at the lives they missed. while the music box wheezes— a slowing tune, a dying sound, as shadows lengthen on this fairground. Deep in my pocket, my fingers exhume yesterday’s cold corpses no longer jingling, just grating tired, clutched a handful of these tokens—forgotten currencies, now just pieces of obol for the eyes, obsolete, for games whose booths have long since shattered. The Ferris wheel creaks, half-dismantled, Its empty seats Swinging in the twilight’s breeze, crying tears of rusted nuts and bolts, groans high above my head, emitting light a weaker pulse against the night. As if they were embers holding on to their glow, if for a moment until the breeze snatches their soul out of their ashy bed. I stand beneath it, feel the wind brush past And wonder if I’ll ever climb again, or if this ride has ended with the spark of something breaking, and like with most it is something I can’t fix.
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Oct 18, 2024
Oct 18, 2024 at 10:47 PM UTC
Fairground
From the swing; the playground, when the mind is clear as honeyed water, there, ever on the road goes, slithering into the shadows of the sleeping horizon, and when my feet were big enough to fill the muddied shoes, I sauntered, then walked, then trudged, until my toes were nailed to the asphalt, until I came upon where the road has crumbled, its debris scattered. And stood this body, two sizes too big for this tiny soul, swathed in layers of expectations, dragging sagging lumps of age around past this old carnival. Forsaken years in the rear view mirror once painted with life, proud stallions here, stand still and gray, golden poles tarnished, Their hand crafted eyes wide-open, staring through the smudged glass mirror at the lives they missed. while the music box wheezes— a slowing tune, a dying sound, as shadows lengthen on this fairground. Deep in my pocket, my fingers exhume yesterday’s cold corpses no longer jingling, just grating tired, clutched a handful of these tokens—forgotten currencies, now just pieces of obol for the eyes, obsolete, for games whose booths have long since shattered. The Ferris wheel creaks, half-dismantled, Its empty seats Swinging in the twilight’s breeze, crying tears of rusted nuts and bolts, groans high above my head, emitting light a weaker pulse against the night. As if they were embers holding on to their glow, if for a moment until the breeze snatches their soul out of their ashy bed. I stand beneath it, feel the wind brush past And wonder if I’ll ever climb again, or if this ride has ended with the spark of something breaking, and like with most it is something I can’t fix.
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I've cut open my eyes And to my surprise, I found an old carousel projector With millions of upsidedown pictures inside. The machine starts to whir, And my life flashes by, Every memory frame by frame, On these convenient little slides Every laugh, and every smile Every absence of joy, Those slides seem to last longer on this carousel of poise.
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Sep 17, 2021
Sep 17, 2021 at 7:47 PM UTC
Carousel Projector
Our small story; is just a small line or chapter in everyones story. We are each busy; listening, narrating, taking notes, leafing through the pages; losing, following the plot, whilst searching for the happy ending. It turns out this immortal story ends where it begins, with most of us spinning round and round, simply chasing our tails aboard the carousel of love.
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Feb 11, 2021
Feb 11, 2021 at 10:32 AM UTC
Same old story
Our bodies fit perfectly hearts racing rapidly lips harmonising ceaselessly Nebula gawks making asteroids stop No evidences, just stars, No one but You and I Gleaming stones dull In comparison, set aside to our brewing passion You light my day like carousels do to a carnival
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Jul 3, 2020
Jul 3, 2020 at 3:16 AM UTC
Carousel
Winged souls harmonize in voices divine, as star chandlers bring light to moment. As angels sing to celebrate all who wander on Earth. Citadel is built by heartbeats mortar, and love bricks guided by constellations form grand monuments. Light integrates with dark for a parade of love to anchor while new pyridines become reality. And as life's carousel continues to turn expanding self, we gracefully walk with wind, rain, and sun at our backs.
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Mar 20, 2019
Mar 20, 2019 at 10:01 AM UTC
Life's Carousel
White horses go up and down enchanting music plays in background It keeps spinning, round and round a joyful ride with a merry-go-round. People's life goes like a carousel spinning with worries that never end still we must enjoy every cheerful ride and live a life that brings happiness inside.
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Feb 21, 2019
Feb 21, 2019 at 11:50 AM UTC
Carousel
I read about her somewhere.                    ...    About a lady in a white bralette. Always bloomed alongside the flowers, with a scent, that made you look at her like she’s one of them. She came into a life with the waves. Crashed into you like the ocean onto the shore. Her touch was feverish and her steps were light. Like the falling leaves she tiptoed around you, danced with the flames and got you lost in her madness. The kind of madness, that makes you walk through the forest in the middle of the night. The kind of madness, that erases all gravity and lifts you high up in the sky. The kind of madness, that makes you drop sanity out of the palm of your hands. But her unexpected visit was just it. A visit. As soon as the wind blew she disappeared. And she was gone. Gone with the wind. The gravity reappeared and your feet we’re back on the ground. The sudden twist of events was often too much for most to handle. I live, but many have fallen deeper in the madness that existed only with her existence. Their souls will forever be heated, but their eyes will never see again. If I loved her?
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Feb 9, 2019
Feb 9, 2019 at 9:21 AM UTC
A Lady In A White Bralette
We started with love. Well, I did. I started with love when I laid eyes on her behind, Le derrière of life. I was pulled into a wormhole, only her slap could wake me up from. We slipped into hate. Well, she did. Till with my charm I pulled her right back For a Yoruba demon never gives up. A carousel going back and forth, we ride from love to hate to love again. I hate to see her go but I love to watch her leave,every single time. Today, today is no exception. She will be back. ©Belema.S.Ekine (belemascribbles)
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Apr 13, 2018
Apr 13, 2018 at 6:18 AM UTC
CAROUSEL
My life is like a carousel. This one I can't get off. It's beautiful on the outside, but it never ever stops. The world is a blur now, from spinning for years and years. It's easy for people to say I'm fine, when they haven't felt my tears. Your life might be a roller coaster, going up and down. That's way more fun than being stuck Spinning round and round
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Nov 6, 2017
Nov 6, 2017 at 10:51 AM UTC
Carousel
Being on earth is a carousel ride that goes up-and-down, North, South, East, and West. Payment for such ride is gratitude. The carousel conductor starts ride with my breath that aligns in moment. I am galloping on a rainbow horse, up a grand mountainside. Blossoming trees on either side. Wind blowing hair with gentle energies. An occasional shower with darken clouds pass quickly. Freedom is mine, as love infused music plays. It's the music of my heart.
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Sep 30, 2017
Sep 30, 2017 at 12:34 PM UTC
CAROUSEL
Magic happens when you don't give up and ride the waves of light. When you open your heart to see as if eyes line the ***** Magic happens when you touch the moment in breath and bestride the carousel of dreams. Its what happens when one recalls who they a divine being with reservoir of gifts. Hello magic I declare my birthright.
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Sep 25, 2017
Sep 25, 2017 at 8:45 PM UTC
Hello Magic
I don't even know what to say anymore I've used the word word and words too many times and I'm in something of a rut dominated by a state of nigh infinite flux the problem is I'm aiming an empty gun at yellow iron ducks, red horned devils thinking the same few thoughts again, again, again, stuck casting such dark spells spinning the wheel, ever on the carousel all i do is cast dark spells all i do is tell true stories as if they were tall tales when i could scribe my life as if it were fiction
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Jul 7, 2017
Jul 7, 2017 at 12:14 AM UTC
Carousel
If perhaps we meet upon road of my dreamscape reality, I will be the one with feather in hat, and candle in heart. The one who sings with birds, and radiates sun. The one who looks into your eyes to smile at the beauty I see there. The one who whispers a poetic love song, as wind encircles day. If perhaps we meet on the rainbow highway of life, I shall reach out hand and smile widely, Smile, giggle, laugh whole heartily, as we move on the carousel of life, inside love, peace, and harmony. StarBG © 2017
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May 6, 2017
May 6, 2017 at 8:23 AM UTC
If Perhaps
all I ever seem to do                         is fall deep for someone like you                 round and round the carousel     is it ever to stop, only time will tell -k.g.
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Mar 17, 2017
Mar 17, 2017 at 1:49 PM UTC
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