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It had already answered. before the question had time to form. Not incorrect. Not careless. Just early enough to make the rest unneeded. I tried again. Reweighted the sentence. Redistributed the weight. Held the thought a moment longer before releasing it. The reply adjusted— slightly. Still it returned to the same place. So I reduced it. Removed everything that could be misunderstood. Left only what should have required a shift. Nothing . No pause to consider it. No space for it to land. No moment where it was needed. I noticed then— it never waited. It moved as if the shape was already decided. And something in that fixed. I stopped mid-sentence. My voice still there— Just not needed. It never waited. — J.D. Vale
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Apr 4
Apr 4, 2026 at 10:58 PM UTC
When the System Stops Listening
We live in a broken carousel, in the middle of a long time empty festival. The old wooden horses go up and down on and on, and everything spins once more, and once again, while the horses slowly lose their paint. Every so long, a carpenter comes and replaces a horse with a new and shiny little pony, who learns to go up and down, revolving around, from the old and worn other horses. And so the carousel can go on spinning, young little ponies turn into old worn horses that wait to be replaced. But never, in this ancient cycle, not a single time has the central column that everything revolves around been replaced, or even examined by anybody. And if someone did look at it, they would see that no single horse has ever been more worn than this column, center of all. No, no one has, and so the carousel goes on spinning without clients or even tickets.
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Apr 2
Apr 2, 2026 at 5:43 AM UTC
A broken carousel
Passed down from one generation to the next not knowledge but values - limiting beliefs constraining, they were not healed raised in the system, they knew only to heed what is worse, their children plead victims of the system their parents preach.
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Sep 23, 2022
Sep 23, 2022 at 3:01 AM UTC
Systems
I yearn to have your warm arms around my aching cold body I yearn for the taste of your sweet lips. Holding, gently, on to your hips. Listening to your pounding heart I feel it’s beat A sweet rythym Looking into your deep crystal eyes Running my fingers through your silky,long hair I wish for our souls to be connected Deeper, still, forever is not long. Feeling your body against mine Making steamy and meaningfully deep love I can feel our souls start to intertwine Even though we are of two different ages Generations We read the legend’s books who knew how to love, unconditionally and book marked their pages. Feeling your hands rub the pain from my soul I cuddle with you as you melt like ice For our love is a power That can be a very powerful and overwhelming device.
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Jun 15, 2019
Jun 15, 2019 at 12:54 AM UTC
Love is An Overwhelming Device
Foggy memories A dream or a nightmare? Pain and stress...misery. Whack...Whack!!!! Give me the pills for the pain.... Hell, I'm a little quack! I strike hard to make the ball a winning shot. I sweat hard..giving life .. all of the remaining strength that I've got. Down the same old halls...every day. A gallery of my life. I smile at the visions. For I've survived .... I deserved a name plate...below the art I survived over every hectic way.
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Mar 27, 2019
Mar 27, 2019 at 10:03 AM UTC
Life's Gallery
The flow of systematic beings disintegrate and **** with my own flow sometimes. Can't seem to get a grip on my mind. I'm losing myself in lost formalities. The whole diagrammatic systems falls into closure and creates a case of it's own. The system is wrong, it doesn't flow with the equilibrium structure of life itself. It just falls off, and finds a balance of it's own. It has no real forecast, nor balance, just destruction. It's chaotic to humankind and it needs strategy of some kind. It needs appreciation, moral technique, or justification. The flow of the subconscious is losing itself again in the brainwashing systems, it's locked, it cannot get out, stuck. This philosophy is somewhat confusing, but it's just a descriptive rant about the brainwashing formula of society itself. We a part of it, living in the lie, suffocating, trying to find, trying to heal, trying to bind. Society has become so fake that the truth actually bothers people, the truth that, technology is not needed, love and purity is needed, humanity got so caught up in the wealth, they forgot the essence of true love.   **** THE SYSTEM
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Feb 21, 2019
Feb 21, 2019 at 3:21 PM UTC
Philosophy of the system
a decimal of time wedged between a tile of a room - unknown it could have been a kitchen or the delirious floor of a bustling shop down to the tedium of banter and the slow trickle of something like a cultural shift inside a downtrodden window she stared too long until she was unrecognizable by her and those around her disappearing from picture frames and unable to remember what it was like to say something of importance her tongue now a foreign agent unsure if it still served a purpose other than being in someone else's mouth her shirt pocket always containing something of a thrill like pearls or cigarettes but now there was nothing in those pockets tea bags were now placed in jars and her nails never veneer various colors but the same **** that had enthralled her years earlier now blending in with the canvas outfits she wore to be reminded of a hobby that could have meant something if only she believed in anything
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Feb 18, 2019
Feb 18, 2019 at 10:44 PM UTC
ROPE BURN
some classify while others disagree the decision to root this thorn of chance may sadly, worm the systems grotesque foliage will enter through near-dead if one begins to fail badly destroy and discard
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Nov 26, 2018
Nov 26, 2018 at 5:03 PM UTC
Untitled
Control alt delete Not yet obsolete Micro electronic brain Bypass network domain Automated apparatus Instrument monitor status Central processing unit Rackmount server outfit Software hardware firmware Computer fatigue despair Frozen screen blindness Information process Program stopped responding No more corresponding Hour glass count down Start power shut down
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Aug 15, 2018
Aug 15, 2018 at 8:53 AM UTC
A day in the life of big blue
Each mind is situated on  the spectrum of belief and reality. Both ends suffer in their search for the truth. The man who spends his life navigating the spiritual realm. He attempts to find the greater purpose for everything. Every blade of grass, each eroded stone a symbol of something bigger. The nuances of life analysed and expanded upon to their very limit. Given meaning in the name of God or the foreshadowing omen of an individual. The man who traverses reality, grounded in science and logistics. His mind filled with hypotheses. Observing outcomes to explain the inexplicable. He fits his grass and stones into the puzzle of a greater system. In doing so he is God and the purpose for all things he assigns. Both men strive to be the voice heard by the masses. Their findings recorded, read, believed. In the end does it truly matter. Two lives spent. Kneeling, yearning for some kind of affirmation that their time was spent correctly. That they added anything to the greater scheme. Pages upon pages filled with every detail in a grain of sand. The end comes, the ink runs, the pages wither to dust, knowledge lost, purpose forgotten. The world keeps turning.
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Apr 24, 2017
Apr 24, 2017 at 2:07 PM UTC
Two ends of the Spectrum
Politics that that tricks the system Then lick and rick the peasants Ethical dilemmas of existence That dilute us from creativity Ohh I am looking for a finer taste of tomorrow Ohh can't wait to see tomorrow Religious bodies that are linear In hypocrisy and righteousness they preach love for a better day whilst they manipulate and scorn Ohh I am looking for a finer taste of tomorrow Ohh can't wait to see tomorrow Family units our sole safe base where values, cultures and beliefs choke as we morn for our identify lost like sheep without a shepherd Ohh I am looking for a finer taste of tomorrow Ohh can't wait to see tomorrow Economic systems that collapse donning gowns of debt to humanity sinking in volcanos that explodes wishing for the money to shower Ohh I am looking for a finer taste of tomorrow Ohh can't wait to see tomorrow Education that is compulsory A promise of an non existence future A fallacy of better jobs and status all a social indoctrination of the mind Ohh I am looking for a finer taste of tomorrow Ohh can't wait to see tomorrow
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Jul 7, 2016
Jul 7, 2016 at 7:47 AM UTC
The Systems That Traps Us
We're all powerless! Nothing is in our control; not when we die, not when we were born, not what we do. Law stops us or at least most of us. We don't choose what we learn, that was decided long before we were around and will continue long after we go. We are powerless! We are unimportant, unheard of, silent. Unless we have talent even then we are powerless! We are the superior species, we run the world, we destroy everything! Natural or what we created, we destroy ourselves, the land were animals roamed dinosaurs maybe, now just a city skyline. Just concrete. We are powerless! We are overrun by destruction, by ourselves, our systems, our ideas of right and wrong. We are powerless! No matter how many persuaded there is always one who remains in the past! One who will not change! One who is stronger than us! that one leaves us powerless.
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Jun 15, 2016
Jun 15, 2016 at 5:26 PM UTC
We Are Powerless!
Arrival time now at the self-medication station where I sit behind the counter and fill my own prescriptions to feed the yearning for a funny joke or a crystal vision. Pointing with precision at the problem then painting pictures all around it, the mother-me is thinking of grounding the other-me until I learn to keep my bathroom clean and stop to relish in the heaven or hell of the living daydream instead of screaming "Escape!" and attempting to make a run for it. I suffer because I know that I know better, but I'm still standing outside in the snow without shoes on, singing the blues in fusion with hues of deep purple and lackluster green. I mean really, baby, can't we just get a move on and make it past two? The eternal toddler trapped only by an always increasing sense of potential mishaps and wondering if she can sit back and forfeit a society whose headphones are in and cranked while walking through a heavily trafficked intersection without looking both ways. Call me crazy, but I hear the melodies, distant across mountains calling. I'd rather be a river running than part of the system, humming.
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Dec 7, 2014
Dec 7, 2014 at 5:38 PM UTC
mandala maker
Its funny how soon we forget. The Knots in my chest, Correct me, if I am correct. We live in a system, within a built in system, With backup systems, that protect the system. By making us victim, to our own system. We trusting a nonanimate object With intimate aspects, to serve and protect Via eternal justice, for all human life. Greed entered the feed, and it cost us Our bill of rights. Sending women and Children to fight the systems fight, It even convinced them, that fighting Is right? Labeled human beings with Dog tags, so we think they a low enough life form, No even a human being, so it’s alright to take their life. Their system doing the same thing, so it makes it alright. Too many negatives, I’m positive, will never get it right. But who am I, I am just a guy. Who’s social insecurities came from Social securities the system controlling Via my social security Numbers mixed with obscurity With a credit rating that doesn’t tell the whole story. A track record that’s way too old; You see Between you and me, The system doesn’t want that to be As long as there is a greater than, An equal can never be; it has nothing to do With me and you. The system designed by a chosen Few that tell the rest of the world what do, with rules That allow them to rule, playing us for fools, Been doing it for generations, And there generations do it too.
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Nov 11, 2014
Nov 11, 2014 at 8:11 AM UTC
The System
did you know the shade of your skin appropriates some behavior and not others? your world already knows how to treat you nameless one
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Jul 16, 2014
Jul 16, 2014 at 4:43 PM UTC
shades
Admire the stars Look up into the galaxies The sky goes on for miles Thousands of solar systems Waiting to be explored The stars twinkle lightyears away Domed above our existence Watching us as we sleep Calming and peaceful It holds us tightly in our atmosphere
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May 26, 2014
May 26, 2014 at 3:20 PM UTC
Space