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Quicksand

The more you struggle, the more you sink; Cut down the divine, sever the link. Lost in a forest with no clear way out, Riddled with fear, crippled by doubt. Your feet start to disappear; They’ve never been so heavy, You’ve never felt this kind of fear. You pull and you kick and you scream, You beg and you grovel and you plead, But to no avail. The weight of life’s burdens, Sentenced to life in jail, no bail. The sand is up to your knees. You wish it was just a bad dream - Your life flashes before your eyes. You see the truths, the lies; You see the pain, the falsehoods, Those times you left your feelings disguised. The hungry pit has now swallowed half of you. Your hips start to get sucked in, Like the earth itself just declared a coup. At this point, you stopped moving, Hoping to delay the inevitable. You’re a living corpse in funereal grooming; Hoping you’ve left a legacy, A mark that’s indelible. As the sand starts crushing your lower body, You realise you didn’t do much, anyway. You resign yourself to fate, Realising you never did quite seize the day. You feel like life slipped through your fingers; Born to suffer, put through the wringer. Your limbs are now submerged. You hope your sins have been purged; You hope you’ve done enough good in the world. You savour your last breaths, Realising you never really enjoyed fresh air; You now await death, Wishing you weren’t so alone and scared. The sand fills up your mouth, And clogs up your nostrils. You face the golden meadows, And find peace in rolling hills. You never did feel good, Except when you fell still.
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Jdelia420
24 / M / Malta
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Written by
Jdelia420
24 / M / Malta
Published
Oct 8, 2019
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Don't let the abyss drag you in.

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