Hello PoetryVoting

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy WritingNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy WritingNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Too Long, Not Enough

by Nour93

How do I tell her in words she understands that I'm hurt. That's too long for a poet. But I'm hurt. Would using less words make a better poem? How do I explain myself: That I am hurt. With short lines. So much pain, So much loss. Would it be enough to just say: Guys, I'm Hurt.
Request permission to use this poem
N
Written by
Nour93
For You?
N
Written by
Nour93
Published
Sep 28, 2024
Time
1m
Permission

Request to use this poem

Tell Nour93 how you would like to use it. We review requests before forwarding them.

AboutBlogFAQPrivacyTermsContact
© 2009-2026 Hello Poetry/v27.0 by @eliotyork
Explore
Hello PoetryVoting
Write